Ticking Rough Edit:
Peer Reviews:
Teacher (Paraphrased):
- Nice shot duration; helps draw out suspense when there's not a lot going on except expecting that something is going to go wrong.
-Potentially find some after effects that can help insert the credits in a creepy, fore-shadowing way.
-Include some dramatic, creepy, and intense sound effects at key moments.
-Include some suspenseful/creepy music. The current track is great for an underscore, but more needs to be done with the sound.
- The title place-holder needs a good title keeping with the theme of the thriller genre.
-Include logo/titles at the start/end.
-Overall editing is great.
-Potentially cut slow-moving sequence of actress walking into the classroom and sighing to keep it moving; it is dragging on.
-Great shots that imply 'someone' is watching.
- Potentially more clock shots and sound effects to reiterate 'ticking' if it's a symbol/motif repeated throughout the sequence.
-Potentially find some after effects that can help insert the credits in a creepy, fore-shadowing way.
-Include some dramatic, creepy, and intense sound effects at key moments.
-Include some suspenseful/creepy music. The current track is great for an underscore, but more needs to be done with the sound.
- The title place-holder needs a good title keeping with the theme of the thriller genre.
-Include logo/titles at the start/end.
-Overall editing is great.
-Potentially cut slow-moving sequence of actress walking into the classroom and sighing to keep it moving; it is dragging on.
-Great shots that imply 'someone' is watching.
- Potentially more clock shots and sound effects to reiterate 'ticking' if it's a symbol/motif repeated throughout the sequence.
Peer 1:
-More suspense through sound, a layer of 'jumpscare' sounds can be used.
-Watch the length of transitions.
-Continuity when headphones are being put on.
-More suspense through sound, a layer of 'jumpscare' sounds can be used.
-Watch the length of transitions.
-Continuity when headphones are being put on.