Preliminary Task #2 Rough Edit
Peer Reviews:
Peer 1:
-The protagonist's voice is too quiet
-Has a smooth flow
-Maybe add some sound effects
-Has a smooth flow
-Maybe add some sound effects
Peer 2:
-It feels a bit slow
-Transitions could be refined
-Transitions could be refined
-After Effect?
-Credits
Peer 3:
-Fizzing scene?
-Change in sound, add another layer
-Continuity
-Change in sound, add another layer
-Continuity
Peer 4:
-Her voice needs to be louder - we can't hear what she is saying
-Good, smooth editing
-Add in more suspenseful music
-Good "blurred echo" sound at the end
-Add in more suspenseful music
-Good "blurred echo" sound at the end
-Add some effects when seeing the person behind
Peer 5:
-I like the different shots that was shown
-Editing was smooth; there was nothing distracting while watching it
-I like the blur from when she falls and where it comes back to someone standing over her
-I like the blur from when she falls and where it comes back to someone standing over her
-Reflection of the intruder through the over was really nice.
Peer 6:
-Really really good start
-Good editing
-Music is a bit loud so we can't hear her talking properly
-Really really good start
-Good editing
-Music is a bit loud so we can't hear her talking properly
-Maybe emphasise the glass, because it flashes by so fast, so can be quite confusing
Teacher:
-Another layer of music needed to shift the atmosphere
-Maybe slow motion or something at the point of drugs dropped
-Maybe slow motion or something at the point of drugs dropped
-Needs title + credits